Denying

the facades glued to myself

Revealing

The inner sanity I chose

I once again rise from the ashes of deaths,

Leading the time, unfold.

Screaching the scorching fire

With the thunder I hire

I draw the reigns of my passion

Oceans of land lying barren.

The sands of glide will blow away,

Barriers, boundaries and betray.

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2 thoughts on “Short composition

  1. I draw the reigns of my passion
    Oceans of land lying barren.
    The sands of glide will blow away,
    Barriers, boundaries and betray.

    Alliteration is wonderfully used. The syllabic rhyme matches perfectly.
    “Sands of glide” is actually a contextual inversion because you have interchanged the words and enhanced the meaning. Barriers, boundaries and betray is excellent visualization.

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